Kalimor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario Pong]

Features? What features?

It gets very boring, very quickly. It takes about 15 minutes to lose.

Perhaps make the ball accelerate quicker, add more features, use your imagination a bit...#

Could be good, but isn't right now.

[Faen]

Great concept

Good graphics, nice idea, good game overall.
Here's some bugs I found:
1) The final screen has 'safely' spelt 'safly'
2) The final screen 'press space to restart' doesn't work
3) The score does not show up until the final screen - it says NaN
4) The option to gain energy while fighting disappears if you restart and/or reach level 9 or something like that.

Some suggestions:
1) Add more types of heal - a massive heal that takes ages to use perhaps, or a heal over time.
2) Add more types of enemy/paint blob/thing
3) Add status effects - perhaps a poison that damages over time and can onl be healed by a certain special heal. Or perhaps a debuff that stops your energy charging until it is healed.

Good concept though...keep it up!

[WormHole SN]

Poor, but great music

The gameplay is basic and dull.
The only reason I didn't vote a 1/5 is because of the music. What IS that song? It is so funny (in a wierd way).

djbdr248 responds:

They Might be Geints, "The sun"

[Path Follower 1.2]

Basic

Good concept, albeit not an original one.
Improved graphics, more obstacles and more levels would be good.
You can cheat relly easily be clicking and holding the mouse - you can then drag it over the borders - fix this by making you lose when you click.

Good potential, but in need of improvement.

neon-dude responds:

It's my first game, so I wanted to make something quite simple so i didn't end up pulling my hair out in frustration. Do you know what the actionscript for making you lose when you click, is it 'on(keyPress="LeftClick")'?

[Clear Vision II]

Great Game

Great storyline, graphics, music and concept.
A little easy, but the story was so good that you don't really care very much.
Overall 10/10

[Platformer Tutorial pt.1]

Wow! Excellent tutorial!

That is amazing - even more so considering you are only 11. The code was well explained and the graphics were excellent. I'm 15 and have been making flash for about 3 years, and it took me over a year to work out how to do that.

Very well done - make the next one please :)

AsianSpark responds:

Thanks for the Review! And i WILL make another one =)